"You sent me the first chapter, I have finished."

After reading the first chapter sent to him by Dongcheng, Ji Yue entered such a text in the chat box.

“What do you think, Mr. Ji?”Would it be ugly?Wouldn’t the story be childish?If it were published, would the publishers reject it?”

From the sound, you can hear how nervous the mood of Dongcheng is at this time, but this is also a matter of course, right?

After all, she used to write and amuse herself, this is the first time she is determined to publish her own novel, so it is inevitable that she will be nervous.

Q: “Do you want me to tell the truth or do you tell a lie?”

“Is this novel bad for me?”

Seeing the response of the season, Dongcheng Embroidered almost collapsed, because according to the rhythm of those light novels or anime, this is obviously the season air that she felt that her novel was poorly written, but she was embarrassed to say it, so she deliberately expressed it in this euphemistic way.

But despite this, Dongcheng Yi still bit his lip very strong typing: "Jiu Jun, although you can tell the truth, I can stand it, this is the first time I am ready to officially publish my own novel, so I know there must be a lot of shortcomings, if you point it out, I can know my shortcomings and then correct them."

“I want to say that there is a lack in your novel.”

After the season aired this line, he paused, and when the heart of Dongcheng Yan mentioned his voice, he continued to type: "That is, this novel is too attractive to me!"

The East Side: “Oh, hey!!”

"Why do the three leaves and the three leaves exchange the body?"What fun things happen when they exchange their bodies?Three leaves know that Taki often touches her European pie, what kind of reaction will it have?I have so much to know!As a result, you hooked up all my curiosity, but you told me that there was only one chapter!You are a great evil!”

Dongcheng: “But Ji Jun, I have already worked very hard to write!”

Seasonal: “Hmmm!I can’t see the next chapter anyway, and I’m angry!What do you say you should do?”

Dongcheng Yi: “This... I don’t know, or should I try harder to write?”Use your spare time too.”

Even through the computer, the season can also imagine the lovely expression of Dongcheng at this time, this quiet and beautiful girl, even if she grew up in such a family, but still maintains a simple and simple heart, will be easy to be shy, and will be because of the words of the people they care about, and fall into the chaos.

But Ji Yu really did not expect that she would actually take her words seriously, so he quickly typed: "Haha, I'm joking with you, you must not write a novel during class, otherwise the results will fall again, then I will really become the culprit."

“I hate it when you make such a bad joke!”Dongcheng Yanjiao complained: "And I am now very stable, I will never lose the first place."

Ji Yu: “Yes, very confident, His Highness, Dongcheng Eunucher Master?”

Dongcheng Yanyin reddish-faced on the other side of the computer, and felt a little shy about his recent words, but after a while, he still asked, “What does the season think of my book?”

"I feel good."

Ji Yu did not joke again this time, typing: "First of all, your writing is impeccable, the plot compared to the previous speed of five centimeters per second has made great progress, character portrayal is also very delicate, anyway, I read your first chapter, I have been impatient to see the second chapter."

Dongcheng Yi: “So, do you like this novel too?”

“Of course I like it.”Ji added, "I'm sure publishers will love it too."

"Is it?"That's great..."

Dongcheng Yi paused, and then very determined typing said: "Then today I talked about Ji Jun here, I immediately began to code words, and strive to let Ji Jun see the second chapter in the shortest possible time!"

"Don't get too tired, just write slowly."Seasonal advice.

"Well, thank you for your interest."

After sending this sentence, the head of Dongcheng Yanyan was blackened, and it seemed that the network code had been broken.

Ji Kak smiled and shook his head, but talking about the publication of the novel, it seems that Xia's Hill Shiyu's "Love Methic" has been sold, right?

The seasonal website was checked, and the date of sale was yesterday.

And the sales record is also good, the first day sold more than 40,000 copies - although this is much worse than the seasonal "sword of the sword", but after all, the two propaganda is not a grade, so there will be a big gap is inevitable.

What's more, compared with ordinary newcomers, the first book has such sales, which is already very good, and it is definitely called the word "best-selling".

Just when the season was thinking so, a sound of footsteps came from the door, and then Xia's hilly poetry plum and the name of the vertegium pushed the door to enter.

“How does the church use soap?”

The season of the empty sloped the pussy plume, did not ask well.

“Isn’t that right for me to leave the horse?”Xia Shuyu went to a chair next to the seasonal air, deliberately gathered a little toward him, and looked up and said, "In addition, I also taught the real white how to use some kitchen utensils such as microwave ovens."

Today, Xia's hilly poetry feathers are wearing low-chests at home, and today is no exception.

A light green low-breasted dress directly exposed her plump upper circumference to the season air, the white flower's *** simply shook, so that the seasonal air turned around a little embarrassed.

“That’s right.”

Season empty nods, said that he is actually very curious, the two people finally used whose original fat ci to do a demonstration, but this kind of thing he is a man is embarrassed to ask the exit, can only take up the cup and drink a sip of water, to cover up their embarrassment.

“What kind of fat ci is we thinking about who we use?”

It is really Xia's hilly poetry plume, at a glance through the seasonal mind, she raised the second Lang leg, black socks to seduce the seasonal nerves, smiled and said: "should it be said is a scum man?"Even if you have a girlfriend, you can't change the nature of "dead house is disgusting", are you still guessing whether it is a vacuum below us?If you’re really curious, I can show you.”

She gently licked her red lips, black legs quietly changed position, let the thighs slightly separated, seems to be welcoming the arrival of this season, the posture is simply charming, so that the season can not help but swallow the mouth.

However, at this time, the name of the real white voice said: "Poetry feather fat ci*, above all water."

“Hmmm—”

A mouthful of water in the mouth of the seasonal air was sprayed directly on the chest of Xiaqiu Shiyu.

The name of the vertebrae is true: "Ah, the Eupas of the poem feathers are also wet."(Unfinished.)